- The type hierarchy - needed to have more focus on GBH as the first thing you looked at was D&AD Lecture and the date.
- The logo isn't necessary but would probably work better if it was added
- The fonts clash a bit...would be better all in sans serif
- Fred also mentioned someones poster had too much focus on it being Leeds so I thought it would be best to change my map image to the whole of the North area and now the arrow points to where Leeds is located within this:
I definitely think the hierarchy works much better now and also I think the logo really finishes it off and makes it look that bit more professional.
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